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| July 26, 2006 |
| Her Trip, His Fall (REWIND...) |
She planned a trip for him.
One that involved hiking but no gear... pictures but no camera...and talking with no words.
A trip with unpaved, untraveled, and winding roads.
Where signs read:
"D.T.B.D "
(Destination to be Determined)
He obliged the invitation, with eager yet subdued thought; to embark on an adventure that had been marinating in blissful innocence; a trip where he sat shotgun, fully loaded (but she held the trigger).
With a signified map at hand, he followed the signs, discovered short cuts, and then discovered it was much better to take the long enthralled scenic route. They got lost,
as they discovered historical sites, and took mental notes for future private smiles.
As Panaramic snap shots forever stain the glimpses of their mind. Then the story flips, as HIS trip, becomes HER fall.
As Norah Jones coos on....
"Her Trip, His Fall" by S. Thorne, Stolen Moments; Collection of Short Stories, Moore Black Press 2006
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Sssh! she's writing.. brooklyn babe7/26/2006
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| 35 Comments: |
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Y'know I would give a lot for someone to want to bounce with me...that would be enuff for me to start a fall of sorts...as long as it's not like Anakin's.
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You know what Amo D.... me too!
Do you think what the world needs now, is romance, sweet romance?
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The world still needs love. Can you possibly have romance without love?
Loved the post. Can't wait to have someone to roll with me like that.
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@ ON...
Good Question.
I doubt. But then where would that leave lust?
@ ka'
Shows my good side, lol (wink).
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Heeyyy Brooklyn, that pic makes me think of a line from one of my poems...
"In my chateau, feel free to
adorn your heavenly form,
In lavish silk wear, crimson red teddy above the knee, I like it there,
Before this moment, many times I've been embraced by those eyes,
I've sucked those toes, held your ankles and licked those thighs..."
See that? Welcome back woman!
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post is making everyone wax lyrical. i could eat that picture and spit out #2b pencils. it's that delicious.
a perfect verse over a tight beat. bonita applebum.
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this was wonderful! i wanna take a trip and fall, but i tend to knock out my teeth cuz the fall is always my face to the pavement.
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BEEN SO LONG MA....BEEN SO LONG...SINCE FELL....
NICE!
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damn...um what was the poem about again...got caught up looking at the pic....
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I know I am a little slow but first I was like what the heck is that? You can tell that I am sleepy, can't you?
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very interesting
With best wishes
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@ Luke.... aiight... but truth be told the story is about an actual road trip I took a few week back, I just flipped it with the pic. Dirty Birdies...
@ Obi... hmmm, I should remix it, and but that beat to i.
@ Msnhim... u said a mouth full, lol.
@ Nikki... I hear U babes. U about due.
@ Didi... thanks for the shout.
@ Sarrcastik... I think its about a trip... but I dunno... I just wrote it.
@ Rose... ha ha... u funny.
@ obokun... thanks
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i have taken a trip and fell hard in my life...can relate, mos def.
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Would be nice to take a trip like that. With my horny toad like aiisss, I'd become impatient and the trip will turn into a train ride...Down the street.
What it do, Brooklyn! :-)
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Look at you gettin' all sexy and creative on us.
Oh yeah BK...New Story. ;o)
SD (Back In Tha Hizzy)
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Damn....sounds good to me! I wanna take a trip like that VERY soon ;-)
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R e m i x!
Figure I'd flip the musical script...
Easy,
Bk Babe
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Sounds like a dope trip to me, to have someone down for you like that is inspiring.
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Oh my ferking goodness! I wanna go!
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Hey Babe,
I hope all is good. I changed my blog address. It's http://insidesp.blogspot.com/.
S
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I'm gonna have to keep refreshing your page because I LOVE THIS BEANIE MAN SONG!!!!
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Cool post. I need a vacation baaaaaaaad. What's good girlie? Are we ever gonna meet up?
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nice post bk babe, how r you?
Speak later
Take care
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Thanks for the love
Recent Commenters... my comp access has been limited
but updates on the way!
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Can I say it again? That photo is Hott!
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Easier for me to comment on the hot photo, too. The poetry, however was equally smokin'.
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BK Babe is here... and soon to reappear....
Had to really soak in my summer...
Almost drying out folks!
Soon Come,
BK Babe!
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look @u getting all deep and stuff...
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well hot damn...this is hot FIRE. :)good post girl!
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Y'know I would give a lot for someone to want to bounce with me...that would be enuff for me to start a fall of sorts...as long as it's not like Anakin's.