Thats deep, like it, love it, "snap" "snap", will back to read more.

 

I like your writing. I would love to know what you think of mine. I'm pretty new at sharing it in the open. If you don't mind, check it out:

consciouslylivingadream.blogspot.com

I'll definately be back.

Peace and Love

 

Girl, I like this.
It's deep; I tell you it's something in this air that we breath!
I have experienced this “Metal Eclipse”, and I must say:
Through this galactic atmosphere, good things have come my way.

I’ve sat in my “Mental Darkroom” trying to find some light, but I didn’t find an image or a mirror in sight.

I realized there was a higher power; One that would defeat me!
I realized there was no light in the tunnel, but God was guiding me.

I didn’t need a flashlight, or a reflection to see what I need.
I knew I needed a re-evaluate; "ME."

So Girl, take your time with defining the NEW you, but also know that you don’t need a mirror because God is guiding you.

**Looking throught the crowd to see you pull up in style**
**Wink**

 

Niiiceeee....love the image you use with it too!

 

Eerie, that pic and Mary quote hit home hard.

thanks.

 

Wow sweetie...that was beautiful. And having a quote up there from ma girl Mary was the cherry on this sundae. Take care love...

-Diva

 

That was very real. Thank you for it.

 

sometimes i feel as though this is all my life is about, redefining, reevaluating who i am, what i am about...

 

Hot to death. Poignant. My favorite line is:

"In there some where is me
And I soon as I find me, I'll shed me and Re appear"

So true.

 

"And as soon as I find me, I'll shed me and Re appear (In Sytle)"...

The best part as far as I am concerned...:)

This is great!:)

 

Nice!

 

Seeking the real is the ultimate goal. I don't read much poetry, but I was watching the biopic of Sylvia Plath. And "Sylvia" said something that spoke to me "The truth always comes to me. The truth loves me." That's what this poem has made me think about.

KZ

 

Wow...this poem puts my stuff to shame...I'm damn jealous.

And how much do I love this Lauryn Hill song? a freaking LOT. :)

 

Well Excuse me!

 

Very nice rhythm!

 

*snaps*

 

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deep

 

nice poem.

 

hmmmm

 

Very evocative. You just reminded me of how much I love Lauryn's X Factor. I had that song on repeat like a mug.

 

You know, if you wear a foil helmet it solves all your cosmic, moonbeam kind of problems. Life is serene beneath the alloy cap.

 

Deep. I wonder if I could start writing poems like that

 

True

 

Enjoyed your blog. Love your wordsmith.