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October 02, 2005
"Something Cosmic"

I keep saying something cosmic is going on in the air
Like the Sun and Moon performed an incantation,
causing a "mental eclipse" within my
galatic atmosphere
Making me sit in darkness while I REevaluate the light
and wait for the truth to appear
No choice do I have, but just face the mirror
Even if the reflection is not clear...
I'm still there.
Focusing on a image
that seems to be as deep as an astral hemisphere
In there some where is me
And I soon as I find me, I'll shed me and Re appear
(In style)
"My Still Moments" Collection of Poems S Thorne (C)Copyright 2005
Sssh! she's writing.. brooklyn babe10/02/2005 
30 Comments:
  • At 1/10/05 9:09 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Thats deep, like it, love it, "snap" "snap", will back to read more.

     
  • At 1/10/05 10:50 AM, Blogger nosthegametoo said…

    I like your writing. I would love to know what you think of mine. I'm pretty new at sharing it in the open. If you don't mind, check it out:

    consciouslylivingadream.blogspot.com

    I'll definately be back.

    Peace and Love

     
  • At 1/10/05 3:18 PM, Blogger MeCrazyMe said…

    Girl, I like this.
    It's deep; I tell you it's something in this air that we breath!
    I have experienced this “Metal Eclipse”, and I must say:
    Through this galactic atmosphere, good things have come my way.

    I’ve sat in my “Mental Darkroom” trying to find some light, but I didn’t find an image or a mirror in sight.

    I realized there was a higher power; One that would defeat me!
    I realized there was no light in the tunnel, but God was guiding me.

    I didn’t need a flashlight, or a reflection to see what I need.
    I knew I needed a re-evaluate; "ME."

    So Girl, take your time with defining the NEW you, but also know that you don’t need a mirror because God is guiding you.

    **Looking throught the crowd to see you pull up in style**
    **Wink**

     
  • At 1/10/05 7:11 PM, Blogger Berry said…

    Niiiceeee....love the image you use with it too!

     
  • At 1/10/05 8:51 PM, Anonymous Golden said…

    Eerie, that pic and Mary quote hit home hard.

    thanks.

     
  • At 1/10/05 9:39 PM, Blogger Diva said…

    Wow sweetie...that was beautiful. And having a quote up there from ma girl Mary was the cherry on this sundae. Take care love...

    -Diva

     
  • At 2/10/05 12:11 PM, Blogger kathi said…

    That was very real. Thank you for it.

     
  • At 2/10/05 1:52 PM, Blogger K said…

    sometimes i feel as though this is all my life is about, redefining, reevaluating who i am, what i am about...

     
  • At 2/10/05 2:58 PM, Blogger Midlife Crisis said…

    Hot to death. Poignant. My favorite line is:

    "In there some where is me
    And I soon as I find me, I'll shed me and Re appear"

    So true.

     
  • At 2/10/05 4:03 PM, Blogger Deirdre said…

    "And as soon as I find me, I'll shed me and Re appear (In Sytle)"...

    The best part as far as I am concerned...:)

    This is great!:)

     
  • At 2/10/05 8:01 PM, Blogger Jez Chill said…

    Nice!

     
  • At 2/10/05 10:49 PM, Blogger Knockout Zed said…

    Seeking the real is the ultimate goal. I don't read much poetry, but I was watching the biopic of Sylvia Plath. And "Sylvia" said something that spoke to me "The truth always comes to me. The truth loves me." That's what this poem has made me think about.

    KZ

     
  • At 3/10/05 8:02 AM, Blogger HighMaintenanceHussy said…

    Wow...this poem puts my stuff to shame...I'm damn jealous.

    And how much do I love this Lauryn Hill song? a freaking LOT. :)

     
  • At 3/10/05 9:19 AM, Blogger The Foxybrown Show said…

    Well Excuse me!

     
  • At 3/10/05 12:37 PM, Blogger Brotha Buck said…

    Very nice rhythm!

     
  • At 3/10/05 2:26 PM, Blogger courtneyelizabeth said…

    *snaps*

     
  • At 3/10/05 4:43 PM, Blogger Chubby Chocolate said…

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  • At 3/10/05 5:50 PM, Blogger Byebye said…

    "making me sit in darkness while I REevaluate the light"

    I gotta tell you. This definitely made me go within myself and do some reflection. Good stuff.

     
  • At 3/10/05 8:34 PM, Blogger Jdid said…

    deep

     
  • At 4/10/05 2:21 AM, Blogger -jkg said…

    nice poem.

     
  • At 4/10/05 8:19 AM, Blogger rishabh_flop_ruler said…

    hmmmm

     
  • At 4/10/05 9:12 AM, Blogger Laylah Queen of the Night said…

    Very evocative. You just reminded me of how much I love Lauryn's X Factor. I had that song on repeat like a mug.

     
  • At 4/10/05 10:58 AM, Blogger UberGoober said…

    You know, if you wear a foil helmet it solves all your cosmic, moonbeam kind of problems. Life is serene beneath the alloy cap.

     
  • At 4/10/05 11:23 AM, Blogger Stunner said…

    Deep. I wonder if I could start writing poems like that

     
  • At 4/10/05 12:06 PM, Blogger Dee said…

    that was cool!!!

     
  • At 4/10/05 3:10 PM, Blogger Sunshine said…

    Love it.

     
  • At 4/10/05 5:01 PM, Blogger Amadeo said…

    True

     
  • At 5/10/05 12:44 AM, Blogger Rose said…

    Enjoyed your blog. Love your wordsmith.

     
  • At 5/10/05 11:16 AM, Blogger Camy Leon said…

    I agree! You are expressive! But alsoi talented and creative. One word doesn't cut it.

    PS~ These drawings are beautiful. If you draw them yourself, then you are great. I love them.

     
  • At 8/10/05 11:28 PM, Blogger jazeGma2 said…

    You go girl! You got it going on on this Blog!

    Lovin it!

     
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